Thursday, January 17, 2008

Narrative (Dialogue) Competition 3A2

3A2 students please post here!

23 comments:

Anonymous said...

1. Type your Narrative here, remember it should comprise of at least two thirds of dialogue.

2. The last sentence MUST be:
"I honestly thought that she was a man!"

3. Include your name at the end of your work.

4. One submission per student.

Mr Leslie Tan

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Anonymous said...

"hey don , do you noe tat i found something interesting today " i exclaimed .
"what is it about ?" don asked curiouly .
"oh .. do you remember that day when you come my house ? " i asked .
"oh ya . we are doing project of POA " don said .
"that day my new neighbour move in right ., then we saw her leg was so hairy that we laugh until crazy ." i say excitedly .
"oh ya . so funny . the leg was so big and hairy like an elphat leg ." don said out loudly .
"i tell you something about the neighbour and you will find it unbelievable . " i said .
"what is it about ?' don asked curiosly .
"she is a woman ! " i exclaimed .
"what ?!" don asked suriprisely .
"i honestly thought that she was a man ."A i said sadly .
"me too ." said don .

Anonymous said...

''Ding Dong Ding Dong'' The School Bell Rang. It was the start of the first day at school. ''hello everyone'' I said. My teacher reach the classroom on time.''Class Today i am going to introduce to you a new student,She is Mary From Xinghua Primary.'' When the lesson start,We mumbled about the new student. I said ''Do u guys think that mary is like a boy?'' Everyone replied''yes!!'' U see just now when she play basketball??'' ''She is so rough.'' ''I honestly thought that she was a man!''

Anonymous said...

"Excuse me,can i go to the toilet?" i ask my english teacher politely.
"yes,you may" he repied.
"AHHH !" I screamed in the toilet.
"why are you in the girl toilet ! pervert you !" i said timidly and also angrily.
"Of cause i was in the girl toilet...I'm a girl,okay!"
"arh ? so sorry ... "i said shamefully and run out of the toilet .
"I honestly thought that she was a man ."



XIUFENG (3A2)

Anonymous said...

"Hi..."yuki chatting over the internet."What is your name?"said yuki."my name is Jason..."not suring what to say..."ok ..why don't we meet up over the over the weekend?"said Yuki."wait... for a while i need.... to check... my schedule..."stuttered Jason.
After 5 mins....Jason came back a reply with saying yes..."ok, we will meet at the a shopping mall..."said yuki.
when i reach the mall,"i saw a lady instead of a guy..." said yuki.
She told me the truth...when nobody want to be her friends...
"i honestly thought that she was a man"said yuki


VIVIAN[3A2]

Anonymous said...

this is my story
"hi may i cum with u girls..please!!"mary ask"of course u can."says the girls."i very impress with you girls..your are very cool in school..""can i be one of your??"ask mary."u wants to join us but must pass our test"say one of the girl."ok,what test"ask mary.
"you must learn how to bully the boys in the school then you can pass the test."days the girls."WHAT,bully boys but i am scare!!"say mary worrying.after a few days pass by mary has finally pass the test..she is happy about.one day she walk home with one of the girls home but she say that she wants to go to the washroom,and she walk away and long time haven come back.mary worry that she will be trouble and go to the washroom to cheack it out.nand she see the girl coome out the boys washroom..she quickly hide and thought"i honestly thought that she was a man

Anonymous said...

"Fire!Fire!"Loud voices of fire are all echoed everywhere around hougang shopping mall.
Everyone was thought to have evacuated the area when suddenly an elderly woman shouted "Where is my daughter?Where is my daughter?"she then jumped on the spot frantically."She is still inside in the building!"shouted by the woman as she plead for someone to rescue her.
Out of nowhere,a guy wearing a cap with a sweater and blue jeans rush out from the crowd into the ablaze buildings.
Awhile later the guy with the cap saved the woman's daughter and the woman was thanking him.
Just then the guy cap came off and reveal his long silky hair. The woman wad shocked and said "I honestly thought that she was a man!"

Anonymous said...

"Come down here at once and help mummy buy something at the supermarket"mum shouted."Why must I have to go and buy.why not John or Gary go"I whined."Don't be so lazy,the supermarket is not far from here and ur two brothers are not home yet.Well? What are u waiting for.hurry up and go.make sure u buy the correct item"said mum."ok lar.."I groaned.
"Finally im here.Better dun waste time and start searching for the items and pay for it."I mumbled.Suddenly,I smelled something delicious."hmm,what a nice tasty food smell."I murmured."That sales promoter is giving away free cookie sample!.I better go there and have a bite!.
"I said."Excuse me may I have a cookie"I asked."sure!" the sales promoter said."Mmmm,what a delicious cookie sample u got there,sir"I said."Ahem,I'm not a guy,I'm a lady."she said."Oh..!
"I said and nearly choked.Slowly I started to go away.
"I honestly thought that she was a man!"

Anonymous said...

"Hey,let's go to Robinson!"I said in excitement."What the heck,let's go!"My friend Jason replied."Last one to reach,is a Fat Pig..hahaha"He cackle with delight."See who's the Fat Pig now...hahaha"I shouted when I won the race."It was just luck"Jason wailed."Oi,let"s go to the girls corner to see some Babes!"I said."Just right behind you,brother"Jason replied.While walking past the bra corner,I spot a man going to the fitting room to try a bra."OMG,did you see that?"I ask."Yeah,i saw the Babe"he said."Not that"I wailed."Then?"Jason whined when he was concentrating on the soo called "Babe"."Faster,faster see,he just come out and went to the cashier!"I said."What?"He whined again."Was that a man that I just saw?"Jason ask while his face was looking pale and feeling disgusted.We came closer to spy on him.After he paid,he turned and....."Is that a lady?"Jason ask."OMG,it is!"I said."The short hair trick me!Idiot!"I said."Haha,somebody has been soo called PUNK"D"After realizing it,"I honestly thought that she was a man!"I said while feeling flabbergasted.

Anonymous said...

It is a new start of the year.
" HELLO EVERYONE,aren't you're still at the holiday mood " me and my friend, mary shouted .
and we went to the classroom.
Suddenly, a boy-like came into the class.
"hello everyone, my name is Suki, i come from japan."said Suki
“HUH ?! You are a BOY or GIRL? If you are a boy, where got boy name is SUKI de. Are you trying to bluff me? You are a boy right? ” I exclaimed .
Suddenly, jerry interrupted "i just can't believe it!“
"believe what? "said I in a blur face expression .
Some more his leg was damm hairy and hair was short and spiky“ jerry wondered.
"no, I'm a girl.“ speaking in a murmur voice.
"I'm here to try out this school“
"i honestly thought that she was a man" i murmured.

karen
3a2 :DD

Anonymous said...

'WHAT!?' oh dear.. are you really sure aboout this!? you can't be joking about something so serious like this,you know..squeal Anna.'I swear what I say right now are all true!'snapped Elli.'
'Then how exactly did you find out about 'her' real identity?'asked Anna.
''Well..I hope what i say later wont surprise you too much..'please stay calm after you had hear what i say..'
'You should know that 'she' in boys uniform seriously looks like a guy and 'she' did looked quite charming..and I just happened to be one of the girls who was fancinated by 'her' beautiful look and when i finally had the courage to confess to 'her' when 'she' was in the student council room and all students had already gone back home and I seriously thought this is a good chance for confessing ..but this was all an accident that i happened to accidentally saw 'her' changing 'her' clothes and i saw the xxx she was wearing like mosts of the girls wear ...I guess you will be able to know how shock I am at that time ..my head was all blank and this just happen too out of blue ..''croon Elli.''oh my god!' luckily you told me this,if not I'm sure to do something many girls could always do to the guy they liked infront of 'her' ..but "I honestly thought that she was a man!" wail Anna.

-Lay Lin-
-3A2-

Anonymous said...

"Fresh Air!",Zoe exclaimed.The air of morning dew.Strolling in the park slowly."Hey there!I'm Erica",announced Erica."Hey",replied Zoe.(I was taken aback at a moment)"Why does Erica have a deep voice",Zoe murmured."Are you a male or female?",asked Zoe."A female,don't let the looks misjudge you",replied Erica.(Slowly walking away from her)."I honestly thought that she was a man!",wailed Zoe

Anonymous said...

One morning , my form teacher introduce us to a new student .. It was a boy and his name is Pamela .. I said to my friend who are sitting beside me

"Eh Guys, There's a new male student joining us .. So me Must act gangster so he like afraid of us.. But y ah his name Pamela ?"I asked one of my friend..

Then with a mono tone type of voice he said to me "Are You blind , idiot ?!!?" He said to me ..

He continued "Pamela is a girl .. Its just her figure looked like a man.." He said.. " Paiseh Izzit?" He continued To irritated me

But i just act as it nothing had happen.. But in my mind only god knows how shame i was and I honestly thought that she was a man!!


From : Kairizaman (Kairi)
(17) 3A2 ..

Anonymous said...

“HUH!!!Are you sure!!!It is really so ridiculous!!!And unbelievable too!” roar Jane.
“Tell you what.. starting when I heard this news I was really so shocking too!!!” Squeal Joan. “How you can prove that ‘HE’ is a lady?” asked Jane. “okay let me explain to you. You remember that time our manager said that he wanted to hired a man instead of a lady as our coffee bean shop is already filled with waitress already other than a waiter…”said Joan. “Oh ya I did remember that our manager had said then before than after that is what?asked Jane curiously… “And that time because ‘HE’ need money urgently so ‘HE’ had no choice she only can wear and behave like a man in order to get this job!!”Replied Joan. “Oh if is me I might have done that too if I need money that urgently” drone Jane. “No wonder that time when I was outside the toilet I suddenly heard someone screaming in the toilet and maybe that time SHE is in the toilet and other people thought that SHE was a man!!!”said Jane. “Yes that’s right” said Joan. “If today u never tell me about this I honestly thought that she was a man!!!”said Jane.

Huiting(12)
3A2

Anonymous said...

"Dad Santhiran and I are heading down to the park to have a picnic..is that ok?"I asked.
"Ya sure..why not you leave right away!"he replied eager to chase me out so that he could get a good sleep.
"Ok then i will be leaving now"I said shutting the door behind me.I called Santhiran and we decided to meet straight at the park.
"Wow!"Santhiran yelled."You sure brought alot of food!"he said.
"Ha ya cause i know that there is a pig coming along with me"I said giggling.
"Alright let's settle down here and start I'm starving"Santhiran said as his stomach started to growl like a bear.
As we settled down we noticed a musculer man sitting right beside us having trouble controlling his dog.
"Urm...could you boys help me out?"he asked in a rough voice.
"Ya sure!"I said and went to tie the dog's leash to a tree.
"Thanks alot boy!"he said."
"No problem sir!"I replied.
"Sir?"he asked wondering why i called him that."My name is Stella and I'm certainly not a sir!"she said.
"Oh?..I'm extremely sorry!"I apologised feeling ashamed.
"Why did you cal her sir?"Santhiran asked.
"I honestly thought that she was a man!"i repiled

Anonymous said...

"oi!,Uncle move your bag leh" john said angrily . "dont be rude la."i whispered softly. "What Uncle!? i am a woman la, stupid boy." "you? aunty? hahaha so funny ,sorry lor AUNTY"john said in an exaggerating manner. after we got down the bus i told john "i honestly thought she was a man!"

desmond
(3A2)

Anonymous said...

"Double up!",shouted the platoon commander.
Alex and I were curious to see a new recruit running behind the platoon commander. Alex asked,"Is this our new intake?""I think so", I replied ."He is a bit small in size.",murmured Alex ."Is this recruit a man?" ,I raised my voice to ask the platoon commander ."NO!",exclaimed the platoon commander.I replied surprisingly,"But I honestly thought that she was a man!"

Anonymous said...

"ping pong ping pong" the school bell rang!
"there's a new student coming to our class!"MR TAN said.
"teacher! is it a girl or a boy?" said the flirty clarissa!
"CLARISSA!! you and your dirty thoughts!" said mr tan!
"teacher! i just want to know!" said clarissa.
"when the new student comes, you'll see!"said mr tan
"PING PONG PING PONG!" the school bell rang, its now the form teacher's period.
"STUDENTS! we have a new student joining our class from today onwards." said mr tan
"hello everyone!" said the new student.
"Is that a boy or a girl?"Clarissa said to Yongsheng
"Is a girl!"said Yongsheng
"I honestly thought that she was a man!"said clarissa.

ferronne ong 3a2

Anonymous said...

"students"..this is our new class mate."wow what a macho man"i murmured to my friend sitting beside me."ok, can u introduce yourself in front of the class!"the teacher said happily .
"halo..i am Tom. huh he speaks like a female"he wailed."halo Tom did u enjoy the pe lesson just now? i exclaimed.he said "yes i like it alot."ding dong" the school bell rang."class, i am going to pass down the survey form please complete this form!""Tom i don understand this question,may i see yours""sure""what! i think u wrote wrongly,why did u circle female!"
"i am a female not a male noob"she said furiously.i told my friend beside me"i honestly thought that she was a man!"

randy ho
(3a2)

Anonymous said...

"vinay, your cousins is coming,so can you please wear nice clothes!"my mom said excitedly."okay mom,no prob!"the cousins came."come in and enjoy"mom said happily."Mom who is that"i murmured to my mom."she is....""what i thought he's a male""no lah she's a female!""Mom i honestly thought that
she was a man".

vinay kumar
(3a2)

Anonymous said...

"Hi Jane!"exclaimed Mary."Hi!How are you?"Mary asked Jane with excitement."I am fine.What about you?"Jane replied."I am fine too."Mary told Jane with happiness."We have not met each other for days and we are meeting again this Christmas."Mary told Jane as she was looking forward to see Jane."Ya I really cannot wait for it."Jane said with joy.
"Oh,Mary! I wanted to tell you something."Jane told Mary all of a sudden."What is it?"Mary asked."I saw a lady who looked exactly like a man.She was having short hair and the way she attired was really like a man-like way!"Jane told Mary."What happened then?"Mary asked anxiously."I thought she was a man and i wanted to make friends with him but once I realised that it was a lady i got really shocked."Jane said.
"That is the end of the story."Mr Tan told his class.His students then asked him the title of the book."The title is,"I honestly thought she was a man"."Mr Tan told his class.

Divya
(3a2)

Anonymous said...

his Princess [neweta] saysss!!!
"ring ring!!" hello is this melly?? Yeah this is melly!! may i know who is this?? I ammmmm!!! sorry i am not suppose to tel u who i am.. sorry... okay then may i know who can u my handphone number... oh it is one of yur clasmate!! Would u mind meeting me today at about 3.30pm at bugis.. oh sure... "hmmmmm" okay then... see u there... Ma!!! i am goin to meet one guy at bugis.. he is one of my friends best friend!!! i wil be back by 8pm.. okay see u.. bye bye... "lily" would mind following to meet my friend.. hmmmmm oh sure.. said lily.. okay i meet u under your block!!! "hiii" are u melly yeah asked the strager.. then after he told mii that he was the one who called mii i was extremly shocked!! i started laughing my head off... "hahaha" i honestly thought that she was a man... :)
....S_NeWeTa...
[3a2]